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Jun 27Liked by Sari Botton, Neda Toloui-Semnani

Such a compelling read. And an intriguing choice of illustration, which drew me in. As someone who's never had an "according to birth plan" delivery, my heart was in my mouth.

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May 15Liked by Neda Toloui-Semnani, Sari Botton

As a Brit Lit teacher who has read, re-read, and shared this story with hundreds of students, I've never felt exactly what I felt while reading this, especially the ending. It's incredible! Mary Wollstonecraft and her daughter would be honored. Thank you for crafting this. ❤️

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Thank you for reading and for your incredible note.

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May 16Liked by Sari Botton, Neda Toloui-Semnani

Made me stop and think... "This is good. I should add a comment to this one."

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May 16Liked by Sari Botton, Neda Toloui-Semnani

I read it yesterday, and am still thinking about it today. Beautifully written. And you produced an absolutely amazing little creature.

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May 16Liked by Neda Toloui-Semnani, Sari Botton

Great read

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May 16Liked by Neda Toloui-Semnani, Sari Botton

So beautiful - thank you. 🩵

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May 15Liked by Sari Botton, Neda Toloui-Semnani

"But no matter how we become Mother, we are torn in the process, sometimes physically and always mentally, and then we are stitched back together. Arising from the table, we are always a new thing. This is the lesson I would learn." ~ Neda, that line really moved me. A beautiful essay--thank you for sharing it.

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May 15Liked by Sari Botton, Neda Toloui-Semnani

Such a beautiful piece it will stay with me a long time. Gee life is good and terrible all at once eh? I always felt for the so called monsters esp as a so called mother. Thank you reading this put a lot of my life in order x

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May 15Liked by Sari Botton, Neda Toloui-Semnani

Flat-down beautiful! I was near tears throughout, no matter, given my gender, that I had the easy part in occasioning five beloved children. Beautiful.

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Thank you!!

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May 15Liked by Neda Toloui-Semnani, Sari Botton

Awe!

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May 27Liked by Neda Toloui-Semnani

What a fabulous piece of writing.

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